writing2fall06

Tuesday, December 05, 2006

LRRH by Olga and Eliane

A little girl lived a village near the forest. When she went out, she wore a red riding cloak, so every in the village called her Little Red Riding Hood. One day, she decided to visit her grandmother. “This is a good idea”, her mother said, and they packed a nice basket for a little girl to take to her grandmother. When the basket was ready,little girl put on her red cloak and left the house. Her mother asked her to go straight to grandma’s house and don’t talk to strangers, because the woods are dangerous. ”Don’t worry mom,” –said the little girl. ”I will be careful.” In the forest she picked some flowers, watched butterflies, listened to the frogs croaking, and she forgot her promise to her mother. She was enjoying the nice day so much, that she didn’t notice a dark shadow behind her. The wolf was behind her, and he asked: What are doing here, little girl? I’m going to visit my grandma. “That’s sound great!” reply the wolf. “Where does she live?” I don’t remember exactly, and she gave him the wrong address, which when he gets there, he will be in a big surprise. Then, she said bye, and they went for different ways. The little girl walked fast, because she wanted to arrive early to grandma’s house. The wolf was running so fast, because he was hungry and crazy, and all his dreams were only about food. The wolf arrived at the address finally out of breath. He didn’t pay attention to the big sign on the gates: “ZOO”. So, many people were afraid when they saw the wolf. The zookeepers were waiting for him, because a smart little girl called to the zoo and let then know about the wolf. They met him at the front gates and accompanied him to a big, nice wolf house, where he will be happy the rest of his life, and never dream about food. Finally, a Little Red Ridding Hood arrived home and had a wonderful dinner and time with her grandma. So, everybody was happy forever!

LRRH by Goumpouguene and Kamal

Once upon a time, there was a little girl called “Little Red Riding Hood”. She lived with her mother in a small cottage. Her grandmother got sick and could die if she didn’t help her. She decided then to visit her and treat her. Her mother advised her to take the right road to go to her grandmother’s house. The road is very far and dangerous; it might take three days and nights on feet to arrive there. She wanted to arrive early because her sick grandmother would die in two days if she didn’t help her. On her way, she met a beautiful white horse which offered her a ride. She agreed, and jumped on the horse. Unfortunately, on their way, she fell down and broke her leg. The horse wanted to take the medicines to treat her but she refused because it may take a time and her grandmother should die. She told him to go with the medicines to her grandmother’s house and give her the treatments. The horse let the L.R.R.H. on the road and went then to rescue the grandmother. When he arrived, he figure-out that the grandmother was already dead. He returned back sadly to revive the L.R.R.H., but he arrived late and found her dead. A hyena came and killed her. The horse was very sad because he loved her and decided to kill himself. Finally, the author after killing his characters, killed him self. When people read this story, they killed themselves; that’s why this story was never published.

LRRH by Takumi, Edison, and Andres

Once upon a time, there was a little girl called Little Red Riding Hood . She lived with her mother in a small cottage. Her grandmother got sick, so she decided to visit her. She bought some fruits, breads, drugs, and alcohol, then she went to the hospital to have a lot of fun with her grandmother. When she showed up there, she saw that her grandmother was talking with the wolf, so she tried to hide and then the wolf started to kiss her grandmother, and danced. She kept hiding, and when they sat down again, she decided to talk with her grandmother about it. When the wolf saw her he tried to hide under the bed, but it was too late because, she had seen him already. The wolf threw the bed and wanted to kill her. But it fell down on her grandmother so she died. Then the Little Red Riding Hood took a knife and stubbed him in the back, when he was laughing. Finally, it is the sad story of Little Red Riding Hood, now she is paying for her crime, in one of the most dangerous jail in the country.

Tuesday, October 10, 2006


YUM!

Monday, October 02, 2006

BLOG ASSIGNMENT #2


For this assignment, you will post your revised "How to Eat Healthy" paper here on the blog. This way, we can read each other's advice and respond. After you post your paper, please read some of your classmates' papers and type at least 2 comments, just like the last assignment. This is a great way to publish our best writing!

Monday, September 25, 2006

DON'T FORGET!

Don't forget to post comments to a minimum of 2 of your classmates' messages. This is a great way to communicate by writing in English!
You should finish this part of the assignment by Tuesday, Sept. 26.

Tuesday, September 12, 2006

Thursday, September 07, 2006

About Me

My name is Kayla and I am an instructor in the ELP. I teach mostly class 2 and class 4. In my free time, I like crafting different things by hand. I also spend a lot of time with my husband Earl and my dog Kobe. I was born in Jacksonville and have lived here most of my life. I'm am looking forward to a great semester with you!

WELCOME!


Hello Class 2 students.
B1og Assignment 1: Please create a short post to introduce yourself to your classmates. Then make at least 2 comments to other people's posts. This is a good way to learn more about each other! Look at my introduction post if you need ideas.